Sunday, 24 June 2012

perfume

The heavy stench of the garbage-laden air parted almost visibly. Alice stood transfixed, trying to determine the source of this fresh new odour..  a fragrance beautiful in its simplicity and charm, it lightened the atmosphere and lifted her spirit. She started as someone whispered behind her. “Rose incense.. It carries the heart to its beloved.”

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9 comments:

  1. Milli Musings24 June 2012 at 04:36

    This was a lovely write.

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  2. Jillian Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ...24 June 2012 at 06:55

    Very nice...

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  3. Kae B24 June 2012 at 08:51

    At last, relief! Well done! There was a kind of progression here, if we take all three women to be the same protagonist!

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  4. Mi amor Tú eres mía24 June 2012 at 13:44

    Well done!!

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  5. ninetynine reasons25 June 2012 at 04:09

    Thanks all for comments.. bmom..that's an interesting observation. Astute. :)

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  6. desay unogratis27 June 2012 at 08:50

    Inspiring even.... beauty revealed right from under one's nose....

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  7. joyce cooper29 June 2012 at 14:19

    each one brings on the emotions....

    very creative!

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  8. ninetynine reasons30 June 2012 at 05:25

    Yes, the nose too can see beauty :)

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  9. ninetynine reasons30 June 2012 at 05:25

    Thanks for the compliment. Kind of you to visit :)

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I'm not in just now, but you're welcome to stay a while and doodle me a note. Make yourself a cuppa if you like, otherwise there's some beer in the fridge, and probably some left-over chocolate cake. No pinching my turkish delight though, and whatever you do, don't feed the cat, she's completely loony.

Lottie

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