It’s as if
Half done
The story takes a turn
To here
Wrong turn
Letting the days drift like
No return
And yet
The crest of the hill was
There
Before you could say
Too many
But that’s the way it goes
Looking back
The two of us, like, like
Final word
Tomorrow watching the sun
Should have known
You did,
It’s as if
Last chance
Oh if only
But
Half done
Adelina Mayfield
I so loved your intro.... great write...
ReplyDeletei quite like it....
ReplyDeletething is, since we've been friends for all of 37 or so eye-blinks, not sure if the adelina writer is you or not? all i know is you as 99 and a name you mentioned starting with an l... so i don't know if that l-name is a nickname but formally/officially you're a-name?
if so, i like whatchoo wrote quite a lot mo'...
captures the crest and the not-quite.... superbly....
Actually it's the writing of a good friend of mine. She's practising to write seriously someday she says. I told her she should blog but she's not into computers! I'll pass on the compliments!!
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