Monday, 23 July 2012

but....

Olivia’s heels clicked mercilessly against the pavement. The rain tip-toed across her umbrella trying to get out of her way, her fingers gripping the handle in a velvet vice. Inside the doeskin gloves, they still tingled from the slap she had laid across Gerald’s surprised cheek. She could still hear his pleading tones “..but Olivia!...”


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10 comments:

  1. Kae B23 July 2012 at 09:29

    Very nice! A walk to cool a fit of rage!

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  2. surrender .23 July 2012 at 09:34

    great take on the pic :)

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  3. David P.23 July 2012 at 10:53

    velvet vice..... way beyond creatively-nice....

    yeah, sounds like gerald's a but-head.....

    exceptional 55 expression....

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  4. Jillian Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ...23 July 2012 at 11:14

    *smiles* using all the senses..I like that.

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  5. ninetynine reasons25 July 2012 at 02:26

    :)

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  6. ninetynine reasons25 July 2012 at 02:27

    thanks for the read :)

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  7. ninetynine reasons25 July 2012 at 02:28

    .... A but-head! :)) You are funny! That had me giggling half the morning.

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  8. ninetynine reasons25 July 2012 at 02:31

    thanks so much..I'd comment on yours if I could read it :)

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  9. Jillian Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ...25 July 2012 at 09:10

    You can't read it?...hang on a sec..

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  10. Jillian Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ...25 July 2012 at 09:14

    should be able to...but, I dunno..it ain't much..just my scribbles. :)

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I'm not in just now, but you're welcome to stay a while and doodle me a note. Make yourself a cuppa if you like, otherwise there's some beer in the fridge, and probably some left-over chocolate cake. No pinching my turkish delight though, and whatever you do, don't feed the cat, she's completely loony.

Lottie

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